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I've been doing wrong
Miss spelling
Creating you to look on
Craving a fresh new start
Dying inside my heart

I've been in the wrong
Scared to go along
Deeply feeling more and more
Wasted away
Could I be waiting
For you ?

To make the first move
Why do I feel the need to give?
Give my heart
Give my love
Give my trust
Maybe the jokes are on me
If I fall once more
Will it be the hole in your open door?

I've been hiding my wrong
Creeping around my miss spelling
Hoping for you to look on
Only I'm lying to myself
Lieing about the truth of
My feeling
To be smash once more
With an open glass

I could be your fallen angel
Falling no more with sorrow
I will be your fallen angel
Loving and holing you closely
I could be your fallen angel
No longer hiding my angel eyes
I will be your fallen angel
That falls from heavens sky

I've been believing my wrongs
Miss judging all along
Pushing you to look on
Only I'm lying
Craving you more and more
As I lay dying
Not holding my heart up high

Why give it one more try?
Giving my heart away
Giving my lust away
Giving my trust away
The jokes will be on me
If I push passed you
Pushing away what I so badly fallen for
You...can't you see i need more

Stop and take me
Break this wire around me
Tie your arms and lay next to me
Then I'll be able to surrender
My wrongs
In any way that pleases you
Once my wrongs are rewritten
I will fall with every intension to tell
You my feelings I had all along

Anna E M

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