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I looked up at the stars tonight
and beheld the heavenly glor'ius night;
I thought of you
looking at my stars too,
perhaps alone.

If when you were looking at them
you were thinking of me too;
these stars of heaven I call ours now,
and oh, that we may share even more;
I've spent hours pond'ring how.

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"You have lied to me, my dear Morpheous, and I have ended our little game; I wonder if I fear the truth more than your lies?"
-TRA


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