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When I am with you
we surf the sky
thinking of us
bring tears of joy
reaching higher
we fly together
each realm of passion
discovering it together

We greeted the birds
and embraced the clouds
hands gripping tighter,
flying faster and higher
as heaven drew nearer
bonding closer and deeper
exploring the boundaries
time framed in our memories
knowing that for us there
will be more discoveries

(c) Edwina Armstrong

Edwina Armstrong

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