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Cut your weekend coupons now,
while loyalty is cheap! Deep-cash
discount blue-light-special on
trust or compassion, save
fifty-percent on soul! Why
bother with (expensive) "brutally honest" answers when,
for twice as much profit, we can sell
sterile white-lies?

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The following comments are for "Discount Loyalty!"
by ak7raplt

incisive and insightful
Your poem is as brutally honest as it's protagonists aren't. :-)
Powerful, and original. Very nice. 9/10.

( Posted by: Spudley [Member] On: March 27, 2003 )

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