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I.......

When I fall,
I stand up.
When I fail,
I don't give up.
When I lose,
Still I hope.
In sufferings,
I try to cope.
When I'm lost,
I find myself.
When reality
Deceives,
Yet I dream.
In pain,
I try to smile.
In success,
I let go my tears.
In sharing,
I find my joy.
In this life,
I'm a winded toy.
In strangers,
I seek attachment.
In life,
I seek detachment.
In fear,
I find my courage.
When I despair,
Yet I believe.
In anger,
I maintain cool.
I know I'm
Nothing,
Yet I try to
Be something.

By:-G.S.Vasukumar


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http://gsvasukumar.blogspot.com/


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I think this is a neat poem G.S. You live. That's what it says to me. You keep on going, you don't give up. It's who you are. Robert.

( Posted by: robnjop [Member] On: November 12, 2007 )





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