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I am not sure which category this is I kinda wrote it long time ago





The Drowned Sea


They pulled the young boy out
his blonde hair wet
Never will this child breathe again
the sea was to blame
A large wooden sign stuck out
Beware : Sea can drown
A thoughtful sea during tide
happened to read the sign
The sea began to cry
tears that cant be seen
Angered it lashed at the sign
in sorrow it retreated
Fearful of hate it churned
Deep diving to the bottom
the sea found a way out
the sea wanted to drown
Impossible as it seemed
the sea couldnt drown
Drenched but not drowned
the sea kicked the pebbles
on the beach in disgust
awaiting the next victim
of the drowned sea.



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