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Open the Door
Come on in
Let the story
Of us begin

Warm yourself
By my hearts' flame
Did I say that?
Was it lame?

I'm glad you laughed
Liked what you heard
I feel so light
could fly like a bird

You were the one
I was hoping for
No more lonliness
Close the door

Side by side
we will be
together let's make
A family.


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The following comments are for "A Dream"
by Myndraker

Hummm....
This is actually kind of funny, It made me smile a bit. thanks.

( Posted by: ilgaar [Member] On: August 30, 2009 )

To ilgaar
Love, or he hope of love has an amazing affect on our minds eh? We can fly and conquer the world!

( Posted by: Myndraker [Member] On: September 20, 2010 )





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