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He thinks he has achieved a feat
seeking security through division
but the fear haunts and thought multiplies
the problem: the gap between

what is and what may be
the itch inside the skin
the memories of love-making
and routine pleasures now nightmare

with chemical change in blood and nerves
licks the tulip in drawing room
and thinks thoughtlessly mindlessly
inflicts more pain to himself


--R.K.SINGH

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R K Singh


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The following comments are for "FEAT"
by R.K.Singh

Tulips




Which reminds me

Tulips on the Organ

are supposed to be better than

Roses on the Piano


Otherwise (please excuse me) I havn't got a clue what you are talking about...

I suppose ref the second verse if you swap the wife or parner on a regular basis it might brighten up things...for a while.

Is it about the military taking over power in Pakistan?

Eric

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: November 4, 2007 )





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