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Like water, I will wash over you

Like rain and wind on your skin

Tasting you like a sigh

Whispering over my tongue

All over the edges of you

I will wash over you.

Never will you see me again

Even as I melt on you there

It will be in the flesh empty again

Breeze and the clarity of water so

Cold to your skin there in

The formless silence echoing

In the chaos around you

You will never see me ever

Wash over you again.

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