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And bowls of crisp and clear push the sea blue ink into the clouds of nothingness ...

Purple on the skin etching it, into the scribe consciences beautiful one flowing, write ...

write this, into your skin ...

The poetry of life here on naked pages of your skin your dairy ...

lines drip down, laying with this naked book to be read, she loves him and keeps it to herself ...

This time it is all tangled veil, as I want to hand myself over reading every inch of her book, every curve is a new chapter... I push this ink writing as we go …

As I'm in love with this book and don't know the veil clouds ending ...


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The following comments are for "Naked Pages..."
by M

beautiful blending of physical and metaphysical aspects of nakedness... the language as imaginatively rich and entrancing/ enchanting as ever... lovely. thanks for this.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: October 26, 2007 )

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