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The touch of my finger tips respond in a sensation only to experience for you. I brush my touch against my khakis enjoying and becoming one with the very environment of the feel. Slowly slide my finger tips to where they become creative and I can feel a sensation of a almost calming sensation to ones self. The beard is over grown and is natural, the touch is course but the intelligence is evident. The right side of my body is sensitive. We must protect the secret where one tells lies and one will not notice. I can only hope it brings fearless emotion and a sense of not being confused all the time. Maybe the government wants us to be lost, they want us to fear the world and listen to everything a cop has to say.

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The following comments are for "PoLice"
by NucleusFire

a poem
i believe you two are correct and that this piece shall be labeled a poem. i was never skilled at labeling pieces, they just come and i leave it up for a path that finds the piece. i believe labeling is judging. i try my best to disassociate from my own judgments when it is up for the"labels". Penelope, i am happy to hear you liked this one. your feed back is valued with great appreciation.

wasnt much about corruption,

( Posted by: NucleusFire [Member] On: October 27, 2007 )


i hit enter on accident, the piece was more really my my state of mind and i spun to how soceity is being controlled into what to think.... and you can floow the rabbit hole from there. i hope you liked the piece, i have respect for cops. and i agree with you on the point that there are policemen that do want to help the community and i thank them. thank you for your comment.

( Posted by: NucleusFire [Member] On: October 27, 2007 )

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