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addiction
perfection
acceptance
rejection
regret
spite
gave up
the fight
messy lies
no goodbyes
no hope
much dope
alive
well
but it's hard to tell











dreams dashed

------
Amy Corless


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The following comments are for "my sister"
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My comment from Trust Your Instincts
If this is true and Claire is not dead...THANK GOD...and if she needs help ...I hope she gets it...All I can say about the person I knew as Claire is that she lifted me up when I was down and when I needed encouragement... she was there...So God Bless her wherever she is...Kacee

Amy ...Your writing is very true...addicts will lie, cheat and steal for a fix...We must stand by the ones who want to change their lives...they need tough love to get back on the right path...

It is good to have one sister back ...hope the other one will follow...Kacee

( Posted by: Nitz Kitty [Member] On: October 23, 2007 )

Wow.
Well done on the simple. How refreshing. Thank you for being candid. Peace~ Amy

( Posted by: satori [Member] On: October 23, 2007 )





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