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How can one forget
That every kiss is new
Each touch to his lips
Has its own way
Its own meaning
Its finite feel
So, in many years,
Millions of kisses from now
How can one pretend
That every kiss is the same
Or that all variations have been played
On his bare mouth
It can't be true
Every kiss
Every kiss
Is new

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by wendythemommy

"Its finite feel"
For that line alone, I loved this, a great testimony to the preciousness of the fleeting moment. nice to see a post from you again. this one was a real heart-warmer.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: October 22, 2007 )

Auld & Fairplay
eric, you know it's you. *grin* thanks for the serenade. it was lovely!

and shannon, thank you! i have missed being here and reading! i am trying to catch up and comment. i'm glad you liked this one.

( Posted by: wendythemommy [Member] On: October 22, 2007 )

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