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Time,
It passed me by.
Without knowing it-
I missed all that around me.
Days,
I count them by
Every single one of them.
A reminder of how I long for you.
Distance,
A long journey to travel by.
Many miles seperate us-
Not enough for me, since
I still miss you.


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AN


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The following comments are for "I Miss You"
by Zia

Zia
I liked this, especially the gem of a quote, "Distance/A long journey to travel by."

But I must admit to some confusion at the last three lines. Not enough distance for you? Would more distance make you miss him/her less?

Still, I felt myself identifying myself with this. Thank you for posting.

( Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: October 14, 2007 )





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