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Could you check the grammar in this writing? And if there are any faults, could you mend for me? please :)

IN ALL LIKELIHOOD, I WILL GIVE THEM MY ADVICE FOR THEIR WORK

This afternoon I was taking a vessel decorated with countless nodule in acrobat garment that I paid more then 100 dollars for, I saw about 2 acres of land that were ploughed 3 months ago that are affected by drought.
I overboarded, and found the cliff is almost evaporated, 2 farmers were operating a tractor, the way they move their machine as retrocession was so slow, they saluted with hand when I was being seen by them, their face looks faint, and as if work with might and main,
Why werenˇ¦t they just nimble biscuits and just let the insecticide work for them? I will suggest them when I next time reenter this place.



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