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I write you from this corner-
a corner where you've always
had me.
In lonliness and despair
in this corner for you to see.

In the middle of chaos and pain-
I write you this last letter.
Trying for once to make
myself feel better.

I feel like I'm slowly dying
here-
it's why I could not live in too
deep.

I write you from the dark
corner. A corner where you've
always had me-
but could not keep..

------
AN


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The following comments are for "CORNER"
by Zia

The Corner
Been in that corner myself. Writing one last letter never really makes you feel as better as you thought it would when you first struck pen to paper.

"It's why I could not live in too deep" confused me a little, but otherwise this read smoothly enough.

Thanks for posting.

( Posted by: chinadoll [Member] On: October 2, 2007 )





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