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like the wagging
of a dog's tail.
The harmonic moaning
beneath the blue sea
by the blue whale

A cool breeze
whistling through
the leaves and trees.
The delightful sound
of the birds and bees.

Dewdrops clinging
to the grassblade and leaf.
The brilliant colors
of the fish
swimming within the reef.

there are also
sunken ships
from the damaging words
shot by your
battling lips.

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