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Many a night, as I sleep, you come to me in my dreams.
Your sensual kiss, your gentle touch, so real to me it seems.

One kiss from your sweet lips, I loose my self control.
No one will ever know, the beauty in you, I behold.
Even when I wake, my thoughts remain of you,

To ever hold you in my arms, I do not have a clue.
Reminiscing of the night before, my heart, for you it yearns.
United once again by night, my love to me returns.
Ever soft your touch, as you fuel my hearts burning fires.

Loving arms around me, fulfilling all my desires,
Openly you give your self, as we slowly become as one.
Velvet kisses on my neck, I feel myself coming undone.
Even though I know this is a dream, Iím captivated by your powers,

As we made love thru out the night, under the stars, in a field of flowers,
Relinquishing your body from my grasp, I sense you fading away.
Even though I beg of you, I know you cannot stay.

You consume my every thought, my search for you, unending.
Only true love will complete me, as my hearts in need of mending.
Until our hearts beat as one, my question remains the same

Steve E. Poore
Sept 23rd, 2007


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The following comments are for "Are you the One?"
by POISON9901

Dreams and Wishes
This is indeed a very mesmerizing account of a dream...I hope your wish for true love comes true. And it will come true if you believe and live as though it will.

-Aubri, a. k. a. ArsPoet2789ica

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: September 30, 2007 )

Thank you so much for the read and the comment, but I haft to ask, Did you see the question in the first letters of each line? That is where the question lies.
Again, thanks for the read and the comment

( Posted by: POISON9901 [Member] On: September 30, 2007 )

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