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I was cut… and you were dressed in white… soiled in your essence of me, stretching, yearning as my eyes see ultimate beauty fingering deep within your soul… Misery Turns…


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by M

Misery Turns
I like the idea of misery turning, like seasons perhaps? or like the worm? ... "beauty fingering..." is my favourite line. because it gives beauty physicality, deliberateness and substance... both meditative and hallucinatory, in fine combination as always. thanks for this.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: September 19, 2007 )

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