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To defend your honor, I pledge to thee.
As I kneel before you, on bended knee.
My loyalty to you, until my death,
Iíll fight for you, with my final breath.

No challenge you ask, shall be too great.
To honor youíre bidding without debate,
I decree to you, as a knight of this land,
Iíll do as you ask; I await your command.

I raise my sword, and swear by this troth.
To you and your kingdom, this is my oath.
To forever defend you, until death I do depart.
One Sword, one Knight,
One Heart

Steve E. Poore
Sept 19th, 2007

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STEVE E. POORE


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The following comments are for "+=={======> A Knights Oath"
by POISON9901

Gallant Warrior, Poison.
I am into this, very much so. This warriors creed is awesome. (I am again reminded of my one time favorite song from the play Man of La Mancha...the song titled: "The Impossible Dream" So gallant. I love this. This Xena Warrior fan loves this piece of yours, well written. The pagan within me lives inside the thoughts of another time when there was more gallantry, bravery, noble ideals, and where ~loyalty~ actually meant something!

Blessings!

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: September 18, 2007 )

Your Knight,,,,
I bow before thee, and bid you many thanks
Some gallant Knights still live on, only with new armor and faster horse's.,,,lol

As always, thank you so much for the read and the comment.
Poison +==={=========>

( Posted by: POISON9901 [Member] On: September 19, 2007 )





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