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Somewhere death is lurking
Breath taken, heart broken, tear jerking
Somewhere, someones hurting

He's got.... murder in his eyes
Tonight
Death by, suicide

Somewhere death is watching
Waiting
He's given up
Contemplating

Should I , Should I not
Lose hope
He's got murder in his eyes
Death by, suicide.....

Lost hope, given up
Enough is enough
Who will, notice when he's gone
Like they notice right from wrong
He's got murder in his eyes
Death by, suicide

At the end of his rope
Given up, lost all hope
And all he wrote
In his note

He's got murder in his eyes
Tonight
Death by, suicide

------
Kenneth D. Woodard


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