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Glittery edges
chase me with axes
kill me with razors
let me feel the pain

stain me with blood
cut me in hatred
slay me with hammers
the pain will remain

enslave me with chains
pierce me with spears
crush me with stones
make me insane

sharpen your teeths
burn me with fire
drown me in oceans
and kill me again.

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I Live For The Pain


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