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The sword is I… it will not cut… but it can cut the Gods… by the stream I plunged the cold blue blade deeply in… sitting in Natures harmony…watching the razor sharp sword …The leafs, the fish, even the twigs flowed, the sword will not cut…


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The following comments are for "Where I am in this place. What ever it is called here..."
by M

"the sword will not cut..."
I like this because it reminds of the vulnerability and fallibility of Gods... the mood here is pensive but meditative and nature is in command, all her separate parts are flowing… good stuff.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: September 18, 2007 )

Your wonderful writes...
As I have been reading all your wonderful write, this will help me be a better writer as you all are… Thank you everyone… for all the inspiration, and great opinions, it is however my honor to publish these words for you…


( Posted by: M [Member] On: September 18, 2007 )

M's Sword Meditation...
I love this meditation...I make fighting staffs (usable art)and I love martial arts weapons, samurai swords in particular. Reminds me of something I heard in a martial arts class a million moons ago...flow like will break. I love this. Thanks for this.


( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: September 18, 2007 )

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