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I leap from me to you and you devoured me... the wild mind of dreams flings me into the dark. I try to think of nothing but, fall hard stiffing in silence, lost in my own head just an invisible sword…


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by M

Matthew's Wild Mind Of Dreams...
Blessings to you, M...

I love how well you can capture a vision/feeling/experience in such an economical manner. Thank you for this. Sweet dreams to you dearest spirit.

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: September 15, 2007 )

Tossin and Turnin
This made me think of how many times I wake up remembering my dreams and ask myself...Where the heck did that come from?Thanks for letting me know other people get tossed around in the dream world, too...I liked it...Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: September 15, 2007 )

wild mind
ethereal, ephemeral to lucid and lyrical, a nicely envisioned evocation of the dream world

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: September 15, 2007 )

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