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I exist. It's sweet, so sweet, so slow. And light: you'd think it floated all by itself. It stirs. It brushes by me, melts and vanishes. Gently, gently.


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Spirituality of Matthew...
This was like a meditation to me. You took me there. Thank you for this. Blessings.

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: September 14, 2007 )

so sweet
resounds and is replete with the beauty of simply being. thank you for this stillness of spirt this brings.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: September 14, 2007 )

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