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My heart is ready to surrender,
Give in to this love,and fly,
But my head keeps asking,
Would you fly beside me?
So the fear takes over,
And I take a step back,
Hide all these feelings,
Because I'm afraid to fly alone.
I want so much to tell you,
That my heart waits here for you,
but I can't,because my head is screaming,
And I don't know how to stop it.
Fear is a powerful thing,
Something I have yet to conquer.
So I hide, hoping someday,
I'll find the strength, to tell you,
Exsactly what I feel inside.


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