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Chocolate kiss cafe
by Shakti (Member) - published: September 9, 2007
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Category - Poetry
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Here. coffee: barako, arabica, hazelnut, benguet, cashew.
kisses.gourmet food.smells frothing leaking into each other.
cheating skins.malcontents.families lovers.strangers and
desires meet and renew themselves here.


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by Shakti

Chocolate kiss cafe
yes, I know this environment, the atmosphere of which is so well recreated here... I love most how "desires meet and renew themselves here", replenishing the stock depleted by the business of living, so to speak...

I'd be one of those malcontents, lurking at the back ;)

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: September 10, 2007 )

another malcontent
Shannon id be at the back too hiding behind huge sunglasses watching people. drinking barako with kahlua. smoking methols. scribbling. reading whatever i can get my hands on maybe Rushdie, Hesse, Winterson, Dickinson, Friedman. hoping the afternoon would go on forever.

( Posted by: Shakti [Member] On: September 11, 2007 )





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