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Snow On the Roof
by robnjop (Member) - published: September 4, 2007
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Category - Poetry
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Snow on the Roof


Fallen in battle,
felled in the same,
from the roof its' life leaks
by a less noble name.


Be it blood, be it water,
it still be in shame.
So say the tears that
fell on the pane.

------
Robert J. Hall, thankful "Pa" of Kev and Dave.


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by robnjop

hm..
makes me feel quiet.

( Posted by: wendythemommy [Member] On: September 5, 2007 )

daughter saloua saint
sakaya free water bird just open the robinet and drink water

saint saint mother of water when i am happy water comes so mush in my house but when my heart is no okay i feel not good so the water started to stop


here in british cancer there is a saly puit water undergroung dont break down the building


mother of water i am the rain niar fire pay attention


saint saly saloua


( Posted by: tounarti [Member] On: September 7, 2007 )





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