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Now
by Shakti (Member) - published: September 6, 2007
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Category - Poetry
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Seduced by the slant of your neck
I pore into the remains of the day
without a thought of the chores
that need doing and the all-important stuff
that needs mending-
Perhaps I will break after all...


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The following comments are for "Now"
by Shakti

Now
thanks for this reminder that sometimes breaking is as much a part of being alright again as is mending. always a pleasure.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: September 7, 2007 )

thanks
always for your comments and insights...it is a pleasure to read what u have to say...ive done a lot of breaking lately and soon perhaps id mend and write better...

( Posted by: Shakti [Member] On: September 8, 2007 )





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