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“To be or not to be that is the question”
What is to be if being isn’t free
Help me understand that which I grief
Relieve me from my discomfort show me glee

Addressing the problem is the solution
But why address it if change does not follow
The torment of the rub leaves me feeling hollow
Expressing emotion I write my troubles
In search of satisfaction free of hurdles

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