Release It...
by nae411 (Moderator) - published: August 27, 2007
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Open the seas;
part,
give me
access.
Now granted
I slip
between your creases,
wade through each fold
your movements
guide me to a place
where I’ll
anchor us still
bringing you closer and closer
till the motion
releases magic.

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I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler

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by nae411

Hey Nae
Still adrift on the open sea, your poetry is never watered down....

Luv Eric

( Posted by: Fairplay [Member] On: August 27, 2007 )

She's baaack!!!!
Naughty, naughty Nae...and we love you that way!

Good to see you here again.

Love ya,
Bea

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: August 28, 2007 )

steam rises
from this poem... it's gorgeous most of all because the magic is mutual, reciprocal… generous, sensuous and hot… can’t tell you how much that’s needed of late, a pleasure to read you again.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: August 28, 2007 )

Thank you!
Hey Eric, watering down loses some of the umph, lol. I haven't written anything at all in ages. I am trying to get back to it. Thank you for stopping by!

Hey Bea! Naughty me? Laughing.... you noticed, huh? Thank you!

Shannon, thank you! I need it too. I hope to find a place here again.

Hugs,
Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Moderator] On: August 28, 2007 )

Well, well, well....if it isn't....
NAE!!!

You welcomed me back just a few short weeks ago, and I am here to welcome you. Still a dirty girl, I see. Nice.

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: August 28, 2007 )

Lilia...
Hey there Lilia, I prefer to think of myself as a tad naughty... wink.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Moderator] On: August 28, 2007 )

release it!
You got it, Poet!
There is no orgasm like the orgasm not yet experienced!
(I hate when this "topic" is "remembered" in poetry...what's to remember? Get on with just getting there again, and again...right?)
You know I still think, and probably always will, that you write erotica better than I've seen anywhere!
And the passion of this lives just as much within your words, as between the lines!

Wonderful to see you back here again!

And thank you for posting this,
Lucie

( Posted by: windchime [Member] On: August 29, 2007 )

My dearest Lucie...
My friend so awesome to have you here. Thank you so much, you always make me smile. I miss you and hope to see you again soon!

Nae

( Posted by: nae411 [Moderator] On: August 29, 2007 )

naes release
nae

A nice hot dip in the waters of passion. You do so know how to make your words sizzle in that sexy way. A delightful pleasure bath of a poem

my warmest
bob

( Posted by: rcallaci [Moderator] On: August 29, 2007 )

Releasing-
Nae,
I don't find you naughty at all, just very honest and open with sensuality- and that's as it should be! I think you write this very well, because you feel it so earnestly- and damn good for you!

I have always told my kids (now 21 and 16) "I hope you never experience violence, but I hope you (at the appropriate time, of course) have great sex!" I stick by that sentiment!
Great to read you, and this was hot and very real... loved it!
-Elizabeth

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: August 29, 2007 )

released
What I like most about this is that what remains unsaid is the most obvious. I have written what I suppose might be considered erotica, but from a man's point of view. So I suppose that means I may not be as expressive as you and that is fine with me because women know so much more about what gets the heart beating than men ever will.

I might be wrong, but what you have written here is the fantasy of 9 out of 10 men.

( Posted by: desvelado [Member] On: September 1, 2007 )

Bob, Emaks, desvelado
Thank you Bob! I like sizzling and sexy in the same sentence!

Elizabeth, I agreee with you. I hope my guys (now young men) do the same. Thank you.

Desvelado,
Yes definately writing about that 9 out of 10 fantasy of men (alot of women fantasize about it too). Good eye sir.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Moderator] On: September 1, 2007 )

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