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Open the seas;
give me
Now granted
I slip
between your creases,
wade through each fold
your movements
guide me to a place
where Iíll
anchor us still
bringing you closer and closer
till the motion
releases magic.

I am on a journey. Looking for Me. Everyday I get a little closer. The more time goes by the more I realize I'm always changing. This journey could take forever... Renae L. Soler

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The following comments are for "Release It..."
by nae411

She's baaack!!!!
Naughty, naughty Nae...and we love you that way!

Good to see you here again.

Love ya,

( Posted by: Beatrice Boyle [Member] On: August 28, 2007 )

steam rises
from this poem... it's gorgeous most of all because the magic is mutual, reciprocalÖ generous, sensuous and hotÖ canít tell you how much thatís needed of late, a pleasure to read you again.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: August 28, 2007 )

Thank you!
Hey Eric, watering down loses some of the umph, lol. I haven't written anything at all in ages. I am trying to get back to it. Thank you for stopping by!

Hey Bea! Naughty me? Laughing.... you noticed, huh? Thank you!

Shannon, thank you! I need it too. I hope to find a place here again.


( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: August 28, 2007 )

Well, well, well....if it isn't....

You welcomed me back just a few short weeks ago, and I am here to welcome you. Still a dirty girl, I see. Nice.

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: August 28, 2007 )

Hey there Lilia, I prefer to think of myself as a tad naughty... wink.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: August 28, 2007 )

My dearest Lucie...
My friend so awesome to have you here. Thank you so much, you always make me smile. I miss you and hope to see you again soon!


( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: August 29, 2007 )

I don't find you naughty at all, just very honest and open with sensuality- and that's as it should be! I think you write this very well, because you feel it so earnestly- and damn good for you!

I have always told my kids (now 21 and 16) "I hope you never experience violence, but I hope you (at the appropriate time, of course) have great sex!" I stick by that sentiment!
Great to read you, and this was hot and very real... loved it!

( Posted by: emaks [Member] On: August 29, 2007 )

Bob, Emaks, desvelado
Thank you Bob! I like sizzling and sexy in the same sentence!

Elizabeth, I agreee with you. I hope my guys (now young men) do the same. Thank you.

Yes definately writing about that 9 out of 10 fantasy of men (alot of women fantasize about it too). Good eye sir.

Nae ;0)

( Posted by: nae411 [Member] On: September 1, 2007 )

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