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I miss you a lot
Constantly you are in my thoughts

I wish you where here
Nearer to me

I hate that you and I are alone
While others are together at home

I hate the fact that Iím not constantly there for you
That I canít be your crying shoulder, your helping hand in need

Iím afraid one of us might want to part ways
Thinking that this would be the best thing

I hope this would never happen
For I know my heart and soul would be left emptied

If this where to be your decision
I would respect it but also fight it

I would fight for our love
Fight for the spark

Living without you
I canít stand the thoughtÖ




Love you tuti




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The following comments are for "I miss you a lot"
by deraj

Simple Eloquence
Your longing for your love is simply and beautifully stated in this poem. It's proof that fancy words aren't always needed in order to speak eloquently.

-ArsPoet2789ica

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: August 29, 2007 )

sap is so sweet
I know the feeling. the longing in your words feels almost unbearable.

( Posted by: thesadpoet [Member] On: August 30, 2007 )





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