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We could be records
spinning,
with needles digging
into our thinking,
playing a
sound.
Sound could be spreading,
like skin and bedding,
stretching and sweating
a cold
ground.
We could be people
slipping,
on sound someone's
spinning and stitching
to sounds we're making,
to make sounds worth
waking the sleeping
who are bleeding out
feeling and reason
without feeling the reason
weaving through them
to move them
and make them
LOUD.


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by matt73

Sound
enjoyed the frenetic pace of this, spinning and skipping and stretching indeed... here's to the elasticity of life and power of the spoken word to change the shape of our world.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: August 22, 2007 )





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