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my footsteps alone
pressed in by the scilence
my heartbeat confused dazed undirected
for the every time i see the sky
it looks alive with you
my vibrant banner
a shield and sword an army of itself
like the sunnrise at midnight
it allows me to see
like the peid piper
i lead this army this army of nobody
i alone stand under this flag
fitfully in the breeze it stands
a swgger swagger
to and fro
here i stand to the marching band
im all alone its in my head
i guess to say that i am dead
but was i to live in the first place
decadance and destruction
you are disruption to graby my attention
from this Furious Pendulum
swingin me back from here
to be murdered in there
all in my mind all in good time
my vibrant banner
this violent manner
like a deadly cancer you spread
i do believe that this is dead
painted blood red
like roses
and a pocket full of posies
ashes ashes
we all fall down

i am a misuderstood lunatic

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