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So I am worried about this night and what is to come.
I'm afaid my feelings and thoughts will all fall undone.
Oh so badly i want you,
My thoughts seem to always drift around you.
But i am waiting for your aproval,
I am waiting for a reasoning unknown and so unconventional.
Do you enjoy it i wonder watching me hold myself and shudder.
So many things ive made clear to you.
so many things im forced to prove to...


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