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Adorned in navy blue signs of the zodiac abound
Hidden away in your tower is where you could be found
Hair of gray shoulder length with two braids
A belt of gold around your waist tied in knots both ends frayed

A great beard of white flowed freely from your face
Strands of silver sparkling like stars in his beard did grace
Eyes of blue shimmer like two jewels in a crown
Head buried in a book, beakers and flask all around

A great staff made of wood its carving intricately detailed
Held at the top by a dragons claw a great crystal impaled
A worn leather pouch attached securely to your side
Amulets and potions inside it did hide

Candle lights dance as he whisks about the room
A book from here another from there more knowledge he値l consume
His strength is in his knowledge his power in the words he speaks
He値l amaze and dazzle with all his crafty techniques

When called upon he値l use his strength and summon the mighty beast
With staff in hand he値l call his name the one all thought deceased
Called down from the heavens flying free again at last
He値l bring with him the power and strengths of dragons past

Merlin and his dragon are quite the formidable pair
One who walks the land, the other rules the air


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The following comments are for "Merlin"
by POISON9901

a detailed and vivid drawing, can picture it lovingly etched in fantastic style...

there were places I tripped over my tongue, but nothing a prudent edit wouldn't fix. the content is pure indulgent escapism... love that.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: August 15, 2007 )

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