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Hateful words, now full of sorrow
Remembering now there may be no tomorrow
Spoken in anger no thought to effect
It was you and your life, my words were direct

My words cut like a knife not one left unheard
You took them to heart, you dwelled on every word
Your expression said it all; I knew what you were thinking
You turned to me for help but I watch you quickly sinking

Somewhere in the night my words tore you apart
Just who was I? And did I think I was so damn smart
With a needle in your vein you decided to take one more hit
I never knew where you got the stuff or who even sold you that shit

By now the drug had taken control and gave you a final high
You said you’d always love me in the note as you wrote good bye
My words they echo loudly, pounding in your brain
I wish I had talked a little softer and maybe realized your pain

By morning it was over I had said my final farewell
I wished I had it to do over then maybe my words would prevail
I could of listen closer and even tried harder to understand
Maybe even helped in someway or even gave you a hand

Instead I shouted and cussed at you and told you how I felt
Now you are gone and I’m hear remembering what I dealt
Wishing I could just see your face another chance to be given
Wanting now to have you back here amongst the living

Be careful of the words you speak as they can never be unsaid
Once they’ve left your mouth and lodged in someone’s head
Make them kind and gentle sugar coat them and make them sweet
Cause words have a way of coming back and some you haft to eat


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The following comments are for "Words of Anger"
by POISON9901

As always your comments are always welcomed, Thats why were here. so that others my input and suggest ways of improvement. You are right tho, I did have some difficulty with this one. I guess i just had it in my head what i wanted to say but could,nt see just how to say it.
Thanks so much for the comment

( Posted by: POISON9901 [Member] On: August 12, 2007 )

Windchime,,As always, Thanks for the comment and the read. I look forward to posting more as now I'm back from a lenghty absence.
Again Thanks fo the comment

( Posted by: POISON9901 [Member] On: August 13, 2007 )

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