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Have Faith
A Poem

Have faith firm
In your heart,
As the day will
Surely come.
Sleep peacefully
Like a bud,
Expecting to open
Its heart to the
First ray of dawn.
Your sufferings are
Like the dark clouds
In the sky,
But the rays of light
Will surely pierce
Through it and
Light the gloomy
Path.
Now, silence is
Preparing for the
Voice of joy.
Have faith,
Itíll surely happen
Like the seed
In the deep soil,
Which will surely
Sprout,
Become a plant
And then a tree.

:- G.S.Vasukumar


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http://gsvasukumar.blogspot.com/


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by G.S.VASUKUMAR

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"Now, silence is/ Preparing for the/ Voice of joy." worth it for those lines alone. wonderful.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: August 13, 2007 )

or "faith" even
excuse the errant 'l', not sure what happened there ;)

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: August 13, 2007 )

Thanks...Shanon...
Thanks for reading this one.That line was nice I think...thanks again...

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: August 14, 2007 )





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