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Have Faith
A Poem

Have faith firm
In your heart,
As the day will
Surely come.
Sleep peacefully
Like a bud,
Expecting to open
Its heart to the
First ray of dawn.
Your sufferings are
Like the dark clouds
In the sky,
But the rays of light
Will surely pierce
Through it and
Light the gloomy
Path.
Now, silence is
Preparing for the
Voice of joy.
Have faith,
Itíll surely happen
Like the seed
In the deep soil,
Which will surely
Sprout,
Become a plant
And then a tree.

:- G.S.Vasukumar


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http://gsvasukumar.blogspot.com/


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The following comments are for "Have Faith"
by G.S.VASUKUMAR

Good Day Today!
This poetic portrayal of God's forgiveness and encouragement is absolutely beautifully stated. Every word captures the true feeling of having all sorrow and troubles finally redeemed. Your poem certainly made my day.

-Aubri, a. k. a. ArsPoet2789ica

( Posted by: ArsPoet2789ica [Member] On: August 11, 2007 )

Thanks...Aubri..
Thanks a lot for reading and liking this one.I should say such feedback really helps me to move ahead in writing....thanks again.Take care..

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: August 12, 2007 )

Vote for me!
Calling all lit.org members. I've submitted a short story called Ellen's Journey to a writing website. I'd appreciate it if anyone could take five minutes to read and vote for me if you enjoy the tale. Follow the link below! Thanks for reading! Jeanette.

http://www.toowrite.com/ellens-journey-9117

( Posted by: jeanette [Member] On: August 12, 2007 )

Jeanette--voting done.
I was your 30th vote. Good work.

VasKumar-hope you don't mind a response on your thread, but since Jeanette is using it, I assume you must be friends and its ok? Yes, no?

( Posted by: TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo [Member] On: August 12, 2007 )

Jeanette--voting done. 45th
A very nice and moving story...I was ur 45th vote...Thanks for the read...

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: August 14, 2007 )

TheRealKarmaTseringLhamo
No, I am not her friend...Anyhow, I had read and voted her story...

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: August 14, 2007 )

Thanks...Lucie...
Thanks for reading and liking this poem.Take care and keep smiling...

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: August 14, 2007 )





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