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I only wish now
That I listened

To the sea of doubts

That flooded my ship
When I first ran into you

Because Iíve sunk

And I am taking forever
To drown

Maybe itís nothing
Maybe Iím really a mermaid

Trying to make something worthwhile
Of a shipwreck

What else is there?

In the Ocean of my heart


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"Soul of my soul of the soul of a hundred universes,
be water in this now-river, so jasmine flowers
will lift on the brim, and someone far off
can notice the flower-colors and know
there's water here."


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