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A walk in life
A Poem

When the world drenched
my soul with sadness
and pain,
You sang the song of joy,
which brought down the
Droplets of rain,
That washed all my
Sufferings away.
When my eyes saw
what it didnít like
To see,
You made me to close
my eyes and feel
the rainbow with
my heart.
In your eyes I can see
the pulse of the stars
shining over the bank
of a river.
Your laughter has
Brought out the fountain
of love from my heart.
You have filled my life
with a cart load of
Each one like a shinning
Red apple; tempting
me for another bite.
Let me clasp your hand
and walk in the path
of life till itís end
and beyond.



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The following comments are for "A walk in life"

Path of love
This made me feel all warm and fuzzy and a bit of sensual tingling added in with the red apple tempting me for another bite...Wow is this good!!! Kacee

( Posted by: nitz kitty [Member] On: August 6, 2007 )

love those red apples
"Memories,/ Each one like a shinning/ Red apple; tempting/ me for another bite..." Those are my favourite lines. sweet and succulent.

( Posted by: AuldMiseryGuts [Member] On: August 6, 2007 )

Thanks...Kacee, Shannon & Lucie..
Thanks for reading and liking this poem...This is my second poem of this year.I have concentrated more on short stories than on poems this year.It's really nice that my second poem is appreciated.

Thanks once again.Take care.

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: August 7, 2007 )

A Walk in Life
Very nice,Very very nice
This read very well and flowed just as well.
Very nice to read you once again.
"Keep on inkin the pages"

( Posted by: POISON9901 [Member] On: August 10, 2007 )

Thanks for ur nice comments.Take care.

( Posted by: G.S.VASUKUMAR [Member] On: August 11, 2007 )

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