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This cigar,
my sole remaining vice,
is really rather nice

though it burns my lips
and seethes my fingertips.

It rushes to my brain
and helps dispel the pain
of a year of little rain



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by SeanNelson

This Cigar
Penelope, thanks for commenting. The cigar in question was a huge Honduran sort of cigar I've been smoking; For some reason, they heat up before they're half-smoked. Also, the smoke itself often seems unusually hot.

( Posted by: SeanNelson [Member] On: July 30, 2007 )





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