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She wanted to feel him
The way she did so many times before
She wanted to feel him
Holding her tight within his masculine arms
She wanted to feel the emotional connection
That they so often shared.

She wanted to see
His beautiful eyes that always gazed into hers
She wanted to see
Him taking hold of her body and drawing it close to his
She wanted to see
Their bodies intertwined as he expressed his love to her.

She could feel him
But not in the way mentioned above
She could touch him
But it lacked the emotional connection mentioned above
What was the difference?
This time, she was bound and blind-folded.


The following comments are for "To Feel and See"
by Robaam

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