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I twirl my hair in fear. I cry in fear. I cry. The pain is released in tears. My soul is a prisoner of your will. What the fuck does it matter? Does anything matter? I can cry to moon. I can tear up for eternity. Nothing matters and no one takes the time to care. Only a tadpole of a slave to produce electricity. Everything bothers me. Everything affects me. Make me cry uncontrollable. I wish I was self centered like you. That way I will not hurt. The hurt can swell and never cause pain to occur. The realization of life takes a soul that has felt pain. The hurt for life is strong with this one. I think you live for eternity and dying is only making believe. I crank the life strong on ten and turn back the emotion because I know you really tremor. I was being strait with you, time passed and I know this. I ask for your forgiveness in a crusade of a life all messed up in bowl of acid. Ill never have this night back. A night of misery and pain for the soul of a reality minded soul. The soul of confusion is let off as nothing had ever happened and im just being sissy. I failed. I failed . I failed . I failed . I failed. I failed. I failed. I failed. I failed.

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