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When he smiles
Little kid giggles
When he doesn’t
The whole world listens

His vision
A kindred spirit
His mission
Prayers ensuing
His virtue
The pride of all
His heart
O so beautiful…

May the force be
With him in
His every blink
And in
His every sigh
May he be blessed in
His every step
And in
His every breath

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