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Clearly, you must be thinking of someone unlike me,
a true test of stress, oh what will you be?
Igorning a voice and a human that cared,
so run off little boy, I see your scared.
You look past me and call me a conquest,
you only see me as a slut with big breast.
Do you even remeber who we were?
or are you still thinking of her?

I guess you really shouldn't be shocked,
if you come in contact with me on your block.
We live in the same small town,
on the same side of the street,
so isn't it inevitable,
our paths will finally meet?
I guess that has never crossed your mind,
then again,
I never though you were the loverboy kind.

Does it make you smug to know that I cared about you?
Does it do you good, everything you put me through?
Was there a mission here, no it can just go away?
well sorry honey, it doesn't work that way.
I think you need to say goodbye to the kid and become a real man,
Then maybe oneday you'll realize, you ditched your biggest fan.


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