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Ashes to ashes
Dust to dust
I give you my heart
And all my trust

I say it a lot
Itís what I feel
I might truly love you girl
You are so dear to me

I know you at least like me
If that is true
Say it out loud sometimes
Thatís what really makes me feel good

Kiss me here
Kiss me there
Kiss me for no good reason
Kiss me anywhere

Your kiss I crave
Your touch I long
The subtlest cuddle
This keeps me drawn

Close to you
Is where I want to be
Fighting this feeling
Only fuels misery

I gaze a lot
Thinking about we
Pondering if how I feel
Is mutual and not just me

You are the one
The one indeed
Who can dampen my heart
But at the same time set it free

Bo ta semper den mi pensamentunan tuti...

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