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Cards have been laid.
And the final words a mortal
once said.
Sins have been revealed.
Only to have them
forever healed.
I lay here only to destroy myself.
Only me, by myself.
Screams are not heard.
Not even my most agonizing word.
Slowly this entrapment persists-
As I quit to insist.
I feel this pain-
'Tis nothing new.
But if only those around me knew...


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AN


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