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Snow falls gently down, and my eyes begin to freeze
Your voice flowing out like a gentle breeze
I hold on tight but I fall away
And this is what you have to say

Bring me here but donít stay
Leave my heart the easy way
Break me down pretend to cry
All I have to ask is why?

The cold doesnít touch my skin
It canít fix the broken parts within
Shattered pieces of my soul
Falling down and start to roll.

Bring me here but do not stay
Leave my heart the easy way
Break me down pretend to cry
All I have to ask is why?

If your love I can not have,
Then put my body on a tab
Iíll run a daily total just for you
My eyes already shine the blues

So tell me why, Iím just a dream
An Illusion as it appears to seem.
Iíll hold my head up high
But Iíll die with one more sigh

Ivy Nicole New
1-7-03 11:31am est

If I did it...I didn't mean to.
If I hurt you...I didn't mean to.
If I left you...I didn't mean to.
If I scared you...I didn't mean to.
If I loved you...I didn't mean to.

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The following comments are for "Tell me why?"
by nicicole

Well done! A lovely poem.


( Posted by: MM [Member] On: January 16, 2003 )

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