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The control she had on me
has finally slipped away.
All because,
I made the choice
to stand up to her today.
Leaving her with misery
and nothing left to say.

It was a life that we were
supposed to share.
Then realized
that she was the one
who really didn't care.

My life is now
more concious to me,
without her control
that was to be


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The following comments are for "Was to be"
by BobT

Was To Be
Sometimes it is better to let go and mive on.
thanks

( Posted by: wanda [Member] On: June 29, 2007 )





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